True Blood WIP

Hi peeps, i decided to draw the True Blood characters since True Blood's my favourite tv seriesits seriously addictive!) and now that season 4 has come to an end, i thought i'd treat my withdrawal symtoms with some drawing! This is a Work-in-progress piece. The things is not many of my friends watch TB and hence, i dont have any one to help me critique or give me comments on my work, and im not sure if it's alright. Sookie and Alcide seem okay but im not sure about Beel, and Eric's face is the biggest problem here.
So please comment okay? i really want to make this one of my best drawings i've ever had
other characters im planning to draw: Lafayette, Sam, Jessica, Pam and Jason. might add in Jesus and Luna, i really like them alot